My Philosophy of Response.
"You can Do Better," But How? In high school, grades meant a lot to me. A grade meant I was passing or failing and I had to figure out how to either maintain the status or improve. Commentary feedback was rarely given and if it appeared at all then it took two distinct forms. One was the usual “Good work”, “Excellent” and similar positive feedback that appeared against my grade. Second was the one that pointed out that I needed to improve but never really said how I was to go about that. They were constructions such as “You can do better”, “You need to revise” or even the dated “Pull up your socks!” One other type of comment that would rarely appear on my assignments was the dreaded “See me!” that would often end punishment for failing on a test. The teachers at this point lacked targeted feedback that would give me a clear indication of what I needed to work on. This was a challenge especially in English and Literature classes where we wrote endless compositions and ess...